On Friday during the hour of conversation we did an activity of Creative Writing. After an initial meditation and visualisation, you had to jot down all your thoughts, then eliminate the unnecessary words and write a poem. At home you’ve had time to proof-read your poem, re-edit it and now you can add it here as a comment.
It was essential to VISUALIZE the place you’ve chosen to go to and USE ALL SENSES to describe it.
You’ve all been great and it’s been fun. Thank you all!
Two Friends
The wonderful smell of the grass
The colour of the mastodontic sun
A lake
Some good music
Nothing else
At the beach
feeling free and mind goes away
silence
only the noise of the waves
the colorful sunset
A ferry
Directed to the statue of liberty
Windy and sunny day
The sea full of waves
People talk
Kids run
I’m lucky to be here
At the beach
The sound of the moon
The brightness of the stars
The cold of the night
That feeling on my skin
Chilled and surrounded by umbrellas and sea
The sea
One who fills the earth
One who creates borders between states
One who remembers the summer passed with its delicate scent
Set of sand and breaking waves
Wait for us to arrive soon
By the sea
There’s a magical place
Rocks, water and wind
All connected with me
I feel myself,
Peaceful
My mind’s as free as the waves
I look as far as I can
I’m the sea
Penny Lane,
what a strange name for such a beautiful place.
My breath has been taken away
that day of July when I saw you for the first time,
I lost myself
in the limitless peace of freedom
CLAUT
Everything in your hand
Mountains, water, blue sky, sun
Peace of mind
Kira is looking at my eyes
Freedom, harmony, just breathing
Like the birds flying
Nature’s perfection
One more time forever
On the beach
Full of positive energy
The taste of freedom
In the sea and its waves
The wind deleting all the negative
SARA C.
A beautiful island
With lots of rocks,
Were there,
Happy because they were not alone.
Birds were singing and flying
And the atmosphere was joyful.
This,
was the beginning of the day:
A sunrise
With warm colours.
In a swimming pool
any day
alone.
I dive and touch it
water welcomes me, wakes me up, releases me
and for a moment it takes my breath away.
Stress, fears and weaknesses fly away
I feel light like a butterfly
I feel at home.
Memories reappear in my mind
like the bubbles I leave behind.
Stroke by stroke
my soul frees from every thought.
Sand and sea
with smiling faces
Light and darkness are balanced
We can’t hear noises
We only listen to the sound
of our happiness
Our fleeting happiness.
The garden in my old house
sparkles the joy
of my childhood.
My body absorbs energy
to climb the tree
of memories I have there.
Happiness can be felt
in my soul.
Everything is green
Trees
Weather
My soul
While some birds are singing
I feel small
As a guest in nature
Who finds his own place
This is mine 🙂
WALKS
Up to the Summit
down to the Burrow
along the pier to the lighthouse
singing aloud I pace.
The iPod pumping in my ears
I seem to walk down all the paths
I’ve never reached for fear.
I seem to tread upon the dunes
I’ll never hoof again for years.
Plodding
I’ve never smelt the salt in my mouth.
Shuffling
I’ve never heard the waves in my eyes.
Striding
I’ve never seen such a light in my ears.
Up to the Summit
down to the Burrow
the Lighthouse pulling ahead
I keep on walking
till my heart is out of breath.